Speech Sandwiches

May 8th, 2007 · 18 Comments
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Speech Sandwich

Improve the following speech by writing a speech sandwich

“My Grandma, what big eyes you’ve got,” said Red Riding Hood.

“All the better to see you with,my dear,” said Mr Wolf.

1. Write the first line of speech ( Remember to use a good said word)

2. Add what the speaker is doing while speaking.

3. Add what the listener is doing.

4. Add some background information

5. Write the second line of speech. ( Remember to use a good said word)

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18 responses so far ↓

1 Elle // May 8, 2007 at 3:14 pm

“my grandma, what big eyes you’ve got!” exclaimed little red riding hood.
she moved a little closer. As the wolf sorted his nite cap, a singing bird landed on the window ledge.
“All the better to see you with my dear,” replied the wolf.
2 Kyrsten // May 8, 2007 at 5:02 pm

” My Grandma, what big eyes you’ve got, ” gasped Red Riding Hood. She looked at him with a puzzled look on her face and took a step forward. Mr Wolf licked his lips. The birds that were sitting beside the window saw Mr Wolf licking his lips and with that thy flew off.
“All the better to see you with, my dear, ” growled Mr Wolf.
3 calum D // May 8, 2007 at 6:46 pm

“My! Grandma, what big eyes you’ve got,” exclaimed Red Riding Hood as she fell into the room. The Wolf growled quietly wearing Grandma’s nightdress in the bed. “All the better to see you with, my dear,” replied Mr Wolf.
4 Jake // May 8, 2007 at 7:00 pm

“My Grandma, what big eyes you’ve got,” remarked Red Riding Hood. She glanced to the sides as she took a small step back. Mr wolf pulled up the nightcap and widened his eyes. A crow cawed outside as it flew into the air.
“All the better to see you with,” replied Mr Wolf softly.
5 matthew // May 9, 2007 at 3:03 pm

“My Grandma, what big eyes you’ve got,” mentioned Red Riding Hood as she edged away from the wolf. The wolf licked his lips as the clock ticked away. “all the better to see you with, my dear,” Mr Wolf grunted.
6 matthew // May 9, 2007 at 3:06 pm

doing this homework is amazing compared to writen homework
7 Louise // May 9, 2007 at 5:37 pm

“My Grandma,what big eyes you’ve got,”said Red Riding Hood as she looked into the wolf’s big brown eyes.The wolf pulled the covers up over his nose.They heard the woodcutter outside the house.”All the better to see you with, my dear,”said Mr Wolf.
8 Gemma // May 9, 2007 at 6:10 pm

“My Grandma, what big eyes you’ve got,” Red Riding Hood mutterd while stepping bakwards in shock, her face turned the whitest shade of pale.
As Red Riding Hood stepping bakwards the wolf licked his lips and his eyes shot open quickly, there was silence in the house except for the song bird chirping softly in the big oak tree outside.“All the better to see you with, my dear,” grumbled Mr Wolf.
9 Glen // May 9, 2007 at 6:38 pm

“My Grandma, what big eyes you got,” spoke Red riding hood.
As she creped closer to the yellow mouldy bed.
The clock stuck two and a tiny wood cutter came out and began to chop wood.
The wolf tried to cover his spotty pimply face.
“All the the better to seen you with, my dear,” whispered Mr Wolf.
by Glen
10 Kara // May 9, 2007 at 7:58 pm

1.”Grandma, what big eyes you’ve got ,” exclamed Little Red Riding Hood as she stared at Mr.Wolf.

As she said that Mr.Wolf slowly tured his head and grinned at the little girl.

Suddenly…..the clock struck 12o ‘clock and the light flickered and the Wolf started to talk

“All the better to see you with, my dear ,”answered Mr Wolf as he looked into the mirror to see if they were that big.
11 steven // May 9, 2007 at 8:11 pm

Speech Sandwches

“My Grandma ,what big eyes you have got,” shouted Red Riding Hood as she took a deep breath. The Wolf put a smile n his face. The woodcutter popped in to see how Grandma was getting on with her illness. “All the better to see you with, my dear,” replied Mr Wolf.
12 Rhys // May 9, 2007 at 8:41 pm

“my grandmother, Wait big eyes you’ve got !”explained Little red riding hood.

wile she shivering with fear.
As the grandfather clock strikes 6:00.
The wolf glanced at the grandfather clock.
“all the better to see you with my darlin,”replied Mr wolf
13 Daniel // May 9, 2007 at 8:47 pm

1.Red Riding Hood said to her grandma “What big eyes you have ”

2.Red Riding Hood is looking for sugar in the kitchen.

3.Grandma is making a cup of tea.

4.The washing machine was on and Grandma had tp raise her voice.

5.And she said to Red Rinding Hood “My dear all the better to see you with.
14 stewart // May 9, 2007 at 8:59 pm

“My Grandma, what big eyes you’ve got,” Red Riding Hood said politly as she edged a little bit towards the bed.

As a tree fell in the woods mr wolf smurked“All the better to see you with, my dear,” as he blinked rapidly.
15 lee // May 10, 2007 at 7:03 pm

“My grandma what big eyes you’ve got,”mumbled red riding hood as she stumbled forward.Dong went the clock in the corner.The wolf sank deeper into the covers.”come closer replied the wolf.
16 David Mckinlay // May 10, 2007 at 8:21 pm

“My Grandma, what big eyes you’ve got,” whispered Red Riding Hood. Red Riding Hood giggled, and as the Big Bad Wolf growled his tummy rumbled. “All the better to see you with, my dear,” replied Mr Wolf.
17 forehill // May 14, 2007 at 4:21 pm

You have written some super Speech Sandwiches P6. I am looking forward to seeing you use speech sandwiches in your stories. They really help to make the story more interesting.
Thank-you, Mathew. I am glad that you enjoy doing your homework this way.
Miss Bruce
18 Miss Fenton // May 30, 2007 at 7:57 pm

What a great way to do homework! I shall be trying this out with my next class.